Passive Voice and Wordy Sentences Should Hardly be Used by Authors
Two curses have befallen my writers group. We’re churning out good stuff mind you. Algrea’s writing an escapist fantasy set in Louisiana (until they find the proverbial wardrobe into another world). I just edited the first 5 chapters with plenty of mystery and magic to boot. VigRoco’s writing a high-browed sci-fi adventure where nothing is…